I reworked and reposted this image. I added space on the top and right, painted in the missing finger tips and exagerated the contrast. To view the original seehttp://www.pbase.com/image/31090373 I look forward to your comments.
Jeff
Gayle; Thanks for your comments. I owe the idea of this image to my niece who knew I was looking for hand shots. She and her friends were playing in the pool. The moment came and went very quickly. I managed to squeeze off 2 shots, this one being the most interesting.
I completely agree that more space is needed top and right. Maybe I can add some space in ps and draw in the missing finger tips. I'm travelling now but will work on it when I return home.