Judges Comments

(i) Content (story, mood etc): A strange story about two women standing in water holding umbrellas - but why?
(ii) Composition: given the main story is about the two women, the image could be cropped on the left and
right to remove much of the uninteresting water and focus just on the two women and their reflections
(iii) Technical (lighting etc): Good lighting on the two models, unfortunate that the model on the left looks like she has her eyes shut