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Teapot
20-Mar-2004 17:48
Camptown, the piano certainly works well with the challenge subject of patterns and I much prefer this shot to the one in the exhibition gallery. I'd have to say that I'm not keen on the transparent hands in either shot though. I think the shot may have worked better without the hands. I also think the signature is too bold especially beside the writing on the piano. In this shot perhaps toning the sig the same colour as the piano hinges might work better. Only my opinion though. Happy clicking.