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Guest
17-Oct-2003 09:58
I had the same thought about the pier initially, though it does work as a good "lead in" to the figure. However, the concrete bench (?) could also serve as a good lead in.
Personally, I think I would have preferred the pier to end before him.
I do like the composition otherwise, though.
Phil M
Ralph Otto
15-Oct-2003 15:03
Interesting, the pier position didn't seem to bother me at all, but next time I will try different positions. I spent a couple hours at the beach looking for shots, but this one I got through the passanger window on the drive out while stopped at a stop sign, so I could not change the angle.
It always figures the shot you use is the one taken at the "last minute" when you say, "hey, that's a neat one." :)
Thanks for the comment and suggestion! :) - RO
Guest
13-Oct-2003 05:33
I like this, but the way the pier dead-ends in the middle of the subject distracts me. I think I'd prefer if it ended before the subject or went all the way though.
Ralph Otto
10-Oct-2003 20:46
Thanks guys for the nice comments. Almost all my photography is emotionaly driven (family, memories, etc.) Hopefully if my 10D is ready from Irvine soon enough, I will be able to squeeze some more in before the challenge is over. Thanks again! :) - Ralph
Ralph,
In looking at the images in this challenge, this is one that really embodies the spirit of the subject. I like the setting, as it evokes so many memories of my youth.
Ralph: I love the composition, the use of black and white, and the resulting mood. The grain also complements the effect nicely. Well conceived and well done! -- Joe Reilly
Guest
08-Oct-2003 02:09
Hi Ralph,
This is my kind of photo! I would have shot this in a heartbeat (in fact, I've shot similar over the past couple days). Contemplation is such a great photo subject.
Excellent composition and contrast, both isolate the subject and give it impact.
