Good concept uses mist to abstract a landscape, but it needs some kind of incongruity to make it express its point. See my similar Laos shot athttp://www.pbase.com/pnd1/image/40171962 and Kal Khogali's image athttp://www.pbase.com/shangheye/image/59967068 You feature mist. Kal features powerlines in the mist. And I stress tombs in the mist. You need to add content going beyond just houses and trees to make it express an idea.