Scott: Strong. I am stopped in-tracks by compositions like this, as they grab your attention but also invite some extrapolation/interpretation. One possible improvement, a technique I use often: Sharpen just the iris/pupil quite a bit more. Will give it a more penetrating look. I do this on many of my portraits to gives them more grab. I have a couple of techniques, so email me if you like. Justa thought. But strong as is; this is one of my favorites so far. --Joe
Vikas
29-Oct-2003 10:01
Great idea Scott, love the white on white with the eye providing the colour. Very Nice. Vikas