I like it, but agree with Lonnit, if the handle was slightly more angled it would add more interest.
Carrhighlander
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27-Aug-2005 16:21
I have to agree with Andy, but I will comment on the conversion b/c I love my LaCie monitor. :) The BW conversion is great - love the high contrast in the can. As for the composition... can is cut off the bottom, there's too much blank space at the top, and it would have been nice if the handle angled towards the upper right corner as its verticality is a tad boring. Nice processing, nice lighting, very strong potential. :) ~ Lonnit
I think this is an excellent concept but the execution has just fallen short. Ill refrain from commenting on the b&w conversion because this monitor sucks. But the composition needs a little work. Clipping the paint tin at bottom edge perhaps could have been avoided. I love the dark gradient.
Stunning and strong image here RK! Love the shadows and especially the title. I want to say I'd like this titled more to the left, but yet not sure if my thinking is correct. The paint can seems to be sitting level. jano
