This looks good, the border really suits it. The vivid colours are great. I wonder how it would look if it was a little less busy - with a shorter exposure? Maybee a bit off-centred with a hand on it or something?
Guest
16-Dec-2003 01:03
Ah, image changed before I could see what the original comments are all about. I like it alot. Maybe a bit more of a crop... but with all the changes it sounds like you've made, you can just ignore me. ;-)
Dorys
I would use the rule of thirds. Put the center of the image on the bottom right or left side of the picture and crop it tighter. Lee
Will Sanchez
16-Dec-2003 00:06
This is a revised version. I decided (for now) to focus on the center image to keep the picture from being too busy. I'm still not sure if this is what I like best. I'll probably be fussing with this picture until the challenge is over.
Thanks for the input. Please feel free to comment. -WS
Guest
15-Dec-2003 17:48
Kewl picture! It would have been just a bit better IMHO if the left and right images were not the same image! Still a neat image.
It's a good prop to have at your disposal. Execution is of course subjective! Nothing wrong with what you've done, but I'd love to see a a reshot closer up crop of the centre image. A great toy for long exposures!
Guest
15-Dec-2003 05:48
Electrifying composition ;-) The colors are great and the image itself is very intriguing. It works well as an abstract.
Will Sanchez
15-Dec-2003 05:42
I'm open to comments on this one. I like the idea, but I'm not sure that I executed it all that well. Any suggestions are welcome.
