I think I would like this better with the women cropped out - just the other 5 people. The dynamic feel would still be there, without the indefinitely separated women in the foreground.
This one is powerful. There is a lot to see. The composition takes the eye from bottom left to top right. For me it's perfect, the whole image has a real dynamic feel especially with the boy falling over. A complete representation of a quiet street in the village that you visited !
