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Sony Forums Challenges | all galleries >> Challenge 43: Red Surfaces (hosted by Michele Pesta) >> Challenge 43 Exhibition > Buzz Off You Clown!*
by Ann Chaikin
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29-MAY-2003 Ann Chaikin

Buzz Off You Clown!*
by Ann Chaikin

Bellingham

Four red fountain pens try to chase away the one who is different.

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Sony Forums Challenges03-Jun-2003 03:39
What an interesting shot, Ann. Very creative thinking. I'm not sure I like the "clown" sitting exactly in the top left corner (just a personal taste issue I think). I think a shift of the camera composition just slightly to the right would make it more pleasing, for me. I really love what you used for background also. Mark J
Sony Forums Challenges02-Jun-2003 05:23
The gold nibs converging at the gold area on the foil is perfect. An inky tete-a-tete. Arv
Sony Forums Challenges30-May-2003 22:17
Ann, nice composition and title for your idea. I think the reflective lighting adds to the sense of a "heated exchange" here. (*)I'm not sure you could change this or would want to, but my eyes would like to see just a little more "difference" in the clown here. MFC