In order to make up for whoever left such an uninteresting comment, I'm gonna try to be constructive. My eyes had to strain a bit, on my bright monitor. So maybe you should try for a sligtly brighter image, and try to get a very sharp focus on the camera's lens while keeping a shallow depth of field. I would also try to compose a bit differently, pulling the camera back a little. By playing around with the picture you can get to something entirely different that will hit the mark :) David.
