Much, much improved, Kal. She is now appealing to us for help (or else telling you to get lost), instead of responding to the grinning man who is now gone forever. It is an image rich in pathos. If this is indeed her home, you have made social document out of this image. Fine work, Kal.
This shot would work as expression if the smiling man at left was cropped out. Her response looks almost as if she is in tears, and you have given us every reason to believe that she lives in this terrible place. If only that man was not there to make the picture into a joke. Once crop can save this image, Kal.