Fine job Chris.
Following Mark's advice might be interesting, provided that you do not get too shallow DOF using 85mm - you could end up loosing focus /sharpness on part of your subject.
Keep on doing this !
Good posing and lighting with a bit of shaping. How about trying it at a lower light output? So you get f/6.3 or 7.1 to blur the background more? Good match of clothing and background.
