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26-FEB-2010

_MG_0595BS.jpg

Canon EOS Digital Rebel XSi
1/2s f/20.0 at 55.0mm iso800 full exif

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mrsmacca01-Mar-2010 04:23
I like the glints in her eyes and the shadow of the hand. Judy
LyleT01-Mar-2010 00:48
Rik, f 20 is a bit small. Half a second was much to long to hold. Catch light in the eyes gives the subject a sparkle though.
David Hobbs28-Feb-2010 05:43
A good key light off to the left. White balance is a bit low. Nice pose and subject. At half a second exposure you really must have a tripod - the picture suffers badly from shake, I am afraid. It might have been better to reduce your depth of field with a much larger aperture which would also have provided a more manageable shutter speed and rendered the background in a nice diffuse out of focus look. Consider also having your subject look more to one side or the other rather than straight on at the camera, which seems a little flat. I also think you need to raise your exposure value using Levels.
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