Judges Comments

The tonal range and contrast level of this image is great. Including a little more of the environment by widening the shot would help with telling a story here.
This image as it stands isn’t particularly interesting and would be more meaningful to the people in it. By having a wider shot and stepping back you are creating a location
and scene for the luncheon happening. The only reason to be so close and focus on just the people is if an interesting moment is playing out.