Judges Comments

You have, by dint of being very close to them, made the 2 men on the left the point of interest in the image.
Unfortunately they are not that interesting in terms of their expression nor their interaction with me as the viewer.
The play of umbrellas across the image has potential. Did you have the opportunity to pull back, make the humans
anonymous and make the umbrellas your feature? If so, I hope that you took that image too.