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Olympus DSLR Challenge | all galleries >> Olympus E-SLR Challenge Galleries >> C18 - Buildings - hosted by gmc >> C18 Originals Gallery > edit image
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11-NOV-2005

adrians image tinkered with - England Kev.

Olympus E-1
1/6s f/3.2 at 20.0mm iso800 full exif

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Olympus DSLR Challenge12-Nov-2005 21:52
G'day Kev - no probs at all, it's great to play! I believe i understand what you are attempting here, and it does definately increase the sense of movement, however, in the process it loses a 'balance' (and i do like 'edgy' pics) - and here's where my vocabulary fails me - i guess it's more instinct than anything i can describe. thanks for playing. 'tis all good. Cheers, adrian
Olympus DSLR Challenge12-Nov-2005 16:56
Adrian sorry I had to play!! I like your original, and I like Gerrards crop, but like you I feel it focuses the girl more than the building, I feel this is a good compromise of the two, it puts the focus back on the building and gives movement to the escalator, and as such makes the girl secondary to the enviroment.
I hope you don't mind me messing with your work.
Kev.