photo sharing and upload picture albums photo forums search pictures popular photos photography help login
Nora van Beek | all galleries >> Galleries >> PAD (Or once in a while) 2010 > Photo0063bw3rs.jpg
previous | next
17-JUN-2010

Photo0063bw3rs.jpg

grace
By
Dave Benson (My oldest son)

*

Blissful beginnings,

if they were that and only that,

would hardly be worth it:

Eve knew not just the color

of apple, the firmness of the fruit,

not just the white froth of its juice

overrunning the full lower lip

to become the stickysweet wetness

of her chin- Eve knew apple

in its essence; she knew apple.

There was nothing to decide.

It would have gone on that way-

had to-

like fibers finding their

rightness in a weave,

like the stuttering music,

after the rain, of every pendulous

drop dropping, full to falling,

leaf to leaf.

The winnowing of truth from fact

is bound to give rise

to its own illusions.

But from the way the sunlight sugared her

nakedness, the way the night coiled-

she knew others would understand.


other sizes: small medium large original auto
share
Mairéad01-Jul-2010 21:27
Beautiful creative work by both of you - a haunting face and words. V
bill friedlander01-Jul-2010 17:33
An amazing image created by a talented artist. Excellent composition and processing. The poem is beautifully written. V+
Jeff Real01-Jul-2010 01:04
The photo is such a powerful vision. Such longing in this beautifully lit face.
It seems like a cry for understanding. I am really mesmerized by this work and by the very beautiful words that accompany it. ~V~
Hank Vander Velde01-Jul-2010 00:43
Nice image and accompanying verse Nora.
Type your message and click Add Comment
It is best to login or register first but you may post as a guest.
Enter an optional name and contact email address. Name
Name Email
help private comment