Not bad, but it needs some improvement. It seems too static. Now if I only knew what to do!! Perhaps the straight on perspective makes it static. Sorry I can't be more helpful or supportive.
Jim Rickards
Smatty
10-Mar-2004 09:57
Per,
nice work on suject focus and simplifying. I also like the off center full bottle.
You cut off the top and bottom lining bottles. I wonder how it would have looked like, if you kept them whole and cut off below. Just a thought. Don't know if it would have worked as good.
