Didn't see the first version so can't comment on whether this is an improvement, but I like it. :) Good background and lighting and unusual idea. niamh.
Guest
11-Mar-2004 09:07
Better than the first version!
Luminus
11-Mar-2004 07:56
This has a dark-satirical cuteness to it...really fits the theme well. This version is much better than the all-black background version. Thumbs up.
Well done and well titled. You've left just a hint of background detail, which adds to the photo. The softness of the upper left leaf seems overdone, seems to stand out too much. The composition is well balanced. Excellent.
Per
09-Mar-2004 15:33
Thanks for the comments, I've been looking at this picture for a couple of days now and I feel there's something missing in it. I'll try to reveal a little bit of the background at the bottom and and not have it all solid black.
Guest
09-Mar-2004 10:26
Yes, the floating object fits nicely, but IMHO the overall result will be better if some surface and a shadow are visible under the vase, both slightly alluded.