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07-APR-2011 Janice Dunn

A lady lights a cigarette

Nov 2014 Challenge - Song, Poem, Proverbs

a lady lights a cigarette
glowing red cherry
lips, puffing without
regret
a cigarette, burning
smoking, grey breathing
choking and
tap tap the
falling ashes

it is over with
a definitive flick —
a lady lights a cigarette
she can see her spirit
dancing in the smoke

Poem by Gian Torrano Jacobs

Canon EOS 50D ,Canon EF 24-105mm f/4L IS USM
1/25s f/4.0 at 60.0mm iso640 full exif

other sizes: small medium large original auto
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cathysmith13517-Dec-2014 20:54
Nice picture. Where was it taken? I wonder if she's tried electronic cigarettes. I've been smoking for the last ten years of my life. With those new electronic cigarettes, it's nice to be able to smoke indoors around my family, rather than having to go outside every time. http://www.vapebaltimore.com
V Neil Knobbe08-Nov-2014 06:25
Perfect. Love the processing.
Tom LeRoy07-Nov-2014 11:50
A glowing cigarette in this excellent portrait, how cleverly done and so perfect with the poem. V
J. Scott Coile05-Nov-2014 17:38
Brilliant.
Jola Dziubinska05-Nov-2014 00:10
Excellent portrait, well matched with the poem. V.
John Lamb04-Nov-2014 19:08
Dying for a smoke? Good candid and poem Janice. ~v~
wernere0104-Nov-2014 19:08
Excellent portrait and perfect use of selected colour.
Stephanie04-Nov-2014 11:59
Powerful!!!
Maaike Huizer04-Nov-2014 10:23
Superb portrait and indeed a strong match. V
laine04-Nov-2014 09:13
You made a good match here Janice
joseantonio04-Nov-2014 05:12
Interesting and nice capture.V.
larose forest photos04-Nov-2014 02:05
Stunning portrait and how beautifully perfect for that very interesting poem. V
LynnH04-Nov-2014 01:26
That's such an interesting poem. I like it and I don't even smoke! :) V
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