"She stretched herself up on tiptoe,
and peeped over the edge of the mushroom,
and her eyes immediately met those of a large caterpillar,
that was sitting on the top with its arms folded,
quietly smoking a long hookah,
and taking not the smallest notice of her or of anything else."
--from Alice's Adventures in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll.
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