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Wanaka CC Score - 10

149] Lunar Eclipse 2021

Author ~ Jill Gardiner

Judges Comments

(i) Content (story, mood etc): It is a clever idea to show the lunar eclipse in this fashion, but for me the blurry,
abstract shapes and lines has not successfully communicated the idea of a lunar eclipse
(ii) Composition: Try rotating the image 180 degrees - in my view, the abstract shape "holds together" better when it is
up-side down; and try cropping away much of the black negative space so we focus more on the shapes
(iii) Technical (lighting etc): Technically well done under difficult conditions: the combination of the lights, tones and darks into
an abstract shape work very well, combining multiple images into a single image, good captures with very limited night light

3s f/5.6 at 135.0mm iso400 full exif

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