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9th October 2008 Copyright © Ian York 2008

Maybe

A poem for the ::November:: Challenge - A Song, A Poem or A Proverb


Maybe

In the tortured twisted recesses of my mind,
there appeared a ray of hope,
maybe tomorrow will not be so unkind,
maybe no more in the dark will I grope...
maybe tomorrow the day will surely break,
the dark gloomy night recede,
maybe tomorrow sleeping feelings shall awake,
and my heart finally stop to bleed....
maybe he will come when I am sleeping,
and gently wake me from my dreams,
maybe he will still my soundless weeping,
and stop the voiceless cacophony of screams,
in the tortured, twisted recesses of my mind,
the dawn glimmers far away,
oh, my heart do be still
my soul do not betray....
let him come,
let me wait,
till its finally day

.... Arti Chopra

::and also Part of my Sol Omnibus Lucet Collection::

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Harrison12-Nov-2008 20:37
Stunning image.
Jason Anderson11-Nov-2008 03:12
Love the translucence in the leaves...and the half-open 'maybe.'
Guest 10-Nov-2008 14:16
Wow. The light in this is wonderful.
Cindi Smith09-Nov-2008 23:28
Whoa! The words speak volumes and I love the image you chose for it! Wow!!!!!
Barbara Heide09-Nov-2008 23:05
beautiful light! love your meaningful words!
Máire Uí Mhaicín09-Nov-2008 21:27
Great image, with a fine use of light and tones, and deep deep words.
Maaike Huizer09-Nov-2008 21:25
An absolutely fabulous picture; and a beautiful poem.
cits_4_pets09-Nov-2008 16:24
Nice aspect, with good details & lighting works well in B&W. Very nice image.
Scott Browne09-Nov-2008 15:08
Great lighting here.
Guest 09-Nov-2008 14:50
This looks so delicate, fantastic light and beautiful composition.
Faye White09-Nov-2008 13:51
sad words.... lovely image
J. Scott Coile09-Nov-2008 13:50
Very nice representation of lyric.