I think using a Lumiquest Pocket Bouncer* (what I had in the house that was similar to what Chuck Gardner mentioned in this answer to my question and the next (a correction) message: http://forums.dpreview.com/forums/read.asp?forum=1025&message=23359396 Compare this image to the previous attempts and I think you will see at least the eye lighting improved. *Bouncer on camera-mounted 580ex, umbrella bounced 580ex slaved to the flash on camera, at your right and SunPak 383 flash set at manual half power to the left, also bounced off an umbrella.