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ctfchallenge | all galleries >> Challenge 146 - Leading Lines >> Challenge 146 - Exhibition > Waiting for the Light
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andy smylie

Waiting for the Light


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ctfchallenge16-Nov-2007 03:46
The problem is too much relatively bland space in the lower right. A tighter crop cutting out 20% of the right and 15% of the bottom would result in a much more dynamic image instead of bright blank space that sucks energy. -tv
Guest 15-Nov-2007 03:53
Thanks TV. No HDR here. Just a very early morning shot while waiting for the sun to rise.

How do think I could improve the compositional balance.
ctfchallenge15-Nov-2007 02:43
Andy, the two others are masterful. This doesn't come up to their standard. Also HDR? The composition seems a unbalanced. -tv
Guest 14-Nov-2007 22:52
Thanks Lydia. I had not considered the third person being that he/she was on the fringe. Will try your suggestion.
Canon DSLR Challenge14-Nov-2007 03:11
I like it that you have two leading lines to the subject. Nice! I think the other person (in blue) is distracting a bit... waters down the group that I consider the subject. So, I'd crop up the left side a tad. But, that's just me. I like the color and the mood. Well done. ~~Lydia