The problem is too much relatively bland space in the lower right. A tighter crop cutting out 20% of the right and 15% of the bottom would result in a much more dynamic image instead of bright blank space that sucks energy. -tv
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15-Nov-2007 03:53
Thanks TV. No HDR here. Just a very early morning shot while waiting for the sun to rise.
How do think I could improve the compositional balance.
I like it that you have two leading lines to the subject. Nice! I think the other person (in blue) is distracting a bit... waters down the group that I consider the subject. So, I'd crop up the left side a tad. But, that's just me. I like the color and the mood. Well done. ~~Lydia
