Hard to say with this one... perhaps b&w... but then maybe if you had just gone to the right just a little bit? I do see the patterns and what you were trying to do... but the impact isn't there for me as much. I might have tried to get out from under whatever it was you were crouching under. Interesting image though. Now for impact on this, I'd boost the yellow pole up a bit and add some contrast. Well done. jano
