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ctfchallenge | all galleries >> Challenge 46: Simply *S* >> Challenge 46: Simply *S* Eligible > Shining Slice (*)
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22nd December 2003 Mardoli ( Marisa)

Shining Slice (*)

Nyon (CH)

I could also add "Sweet Sparkling Squashable"...but my knowledge of English is definitely questionable...as my skills for photgraphy!
The picture was not retouched, just cropped and framed.


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Guest 27-Dec-2003 14:39
This is a good improvement of the earlier shot, the rippled reflection adds to the image. * There are some hot spots (overexposure) that are a bit distracting.
Guest 24-Dec-2003 02:35
Yea, it looks better. Wow!
ctfchallenge23-Dec-2003 22:28
Thank you, Doris!
I have just changed something, I think it looks a little better now...
Marisa
Guest 23-Dec-2003 20:28
Since you still have your (*) on this one I'll give you some comments. :-) The concept is very nice. I like how you tied the orange frame in with the subject and the use of a black background. The lighting is wonderful. However, the subject is a bit out of focus and I would clone out the item on the bottem just to the left.

Well done otherwise.
Dorys