Do you want someone to get picky? It's a nice portrait. I'm not sure exactly what you did to make the picture look this way, but I think I'd like to see it before the changes. I'm also a little undecided about the hand. It adds something to the shot, but it also blends a little too well with the shirt. Perhaps a darker colored shirt would keep the bottom half of the picture from being so bright.
Cute guy though :o)