Well I'm slow to catch up but I agree with Rod and Jim basically. The foot and leg emerging into the sunlight are terrific - the foot in the corner immediately grabs attention. Most of the rest can be cropped out to leave the essential corner and as Jim mentioned the foot more snugly in the corner. -tv
Rod
30-Mar-2009 01:57
Yes that's wot I meant to say & would have bin less typing too:-)
Saying it differently, the foot needs to be closer to the corner for me, with the upper elements made darker.
Jim
Rod
29-Mar-2009 20:53
I'm left wanting to see more of Freddy, I think if his body was in a lot darker shadow his foot would be the sole focal point & the picy would work a lot better I reckon. The well lit wood isn't helping either. Apart from those few minor points I don't really like the overall look of the picy:-)