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14-JUN-2004 Doris Baillet

Translucent *

Olympus C-765 UZ
1/160s f/3.2 at 10.9mm iso64 hide exif
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Date/Time14-Jun-2004 18:54:04
MakeOlympus
ModelC765UZ
Flash UsedNo
Focal Length10.9 mm
Exposure Time1/160 sec
Aperturef/3.2
ISO Equivalent64
Exposure Bias
White Balance
Metering Modematrix (5)
JPEG Quality (6)
Exposure Programmanual (1)
Focus Distance

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Guest 22-Sep-2004 09:42
Thank you, Olaf. I had not time to change the photo!
Canon DSLR Challenge17-Sep-2004 18:47
Doris, I see the beauty in the translucency here! A couple of suggestions for improving this image, both have to do with the background: 1. It is too equal in tone to the flower and therefore there is not enough separation between flower and background, in spite of the excellent selective focus. One way to fix this could be to selectively darken the background a bit. 2. On the left edge there is a white object in the middle and on the right there is an out of focus flower. Those two elements are slightly distracting and could be removed, using the cloning tool. --Olaf