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Whistling in the Dark (Page 4)

Outside the light was fading fast and Grandpa knew it would be black as pitch by the time he reached the dreaded well. He tried to walk like a man until he got out sight of the cabin. Willie would be watching him and if he took off running Willie would accuse him of being scared, "witless," and he probably was but he didn't need Willie rubbing it in especially since grandpa knew Willie was every bit as afraid of the old well as he was.
The scent of wood smoke followed him into the woods. Dead leaves rustled, twigs snapped. An owl who-who-who'd sounding a little like Willie but this time the sound made him shiver. When he was sure he was far enough away he started running like the wind praying the ghosts couldn't catch him. His heart was already a tom-tom before he reached the meadow and when he did he placed his arm over his eyes and run even faster hoping to quickly out distance himself from that horrid place and the ghosts. And that's when it happened.


Note: I had my grandson, Hunter, pose for this scene. I told him the look I wanted and I think he did a good job of it.


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Steve Sharp04-Nov-2009 23:37
Perfect for the season :)
LeuAnna Taylor04-Nov-2009 02:30
Can't wait for the next segment of your tale. Hunter and you both did a great job with the shot here!
an nguyen02-Nov-2009 00:52
Oh, dear, the closet, I am going to hide in there.
poetry66601-Nov-2009 14:27
Oh another great chapter to this wonderful spooky story Char. Love the image and full moon too!..BV!!
laine31-Oct-2009 06:30
Love how you managed this..congrats to Hunter who is very good at playing the part !!
Hank Vander Velde30-Oct-2009 13:23
Super and most suspenseful Char.
NealyBob30-Oct-2009 06:50
Very spooky scene Char nicely illustrated~! V
January Grey30-Oct-2009 03:38
Way to go Hunter! Wonderful story & a terrific & haunting composition, Char. V~
Marcia Colelli30-Oct-2009 00:49
Fantastic story and wonderful image V
Marcia Rules29-Oct-2009 23:45
that is awesome and beyond imaginative :) vote
waterfalls man29-Oct-2009 23:02
Excellent Work V!!
Jay Levin29-Oct-2009 22:52
You have me on the edge, Char, and I love the owl and full moon in this. Vote
Michael Shpuntov29-Oct-2009 22:42
Excellent low key image. Love it Vote.
Aida Villaronga29-Oct-2009 22:35
Outstanding! This is one of the most unique and creative photos I've seen. BV
Patricia Kay29-Oct-2009 22:32
Great art work Char...chills up and down my spine!!!!.BV
Cindi Smith29-Oct-2009 20:55
Oh, your stories just facinate me! More, I need more!!!!!!!
Al Chesworth29-Oct-2009 19:24
Spooky, well then, don't keep it to yourself.
bill friedlander29-Oct-2009 18:37
Great night shot and excellent lighting on the boy. Can't wait to find out what happened. V
Jim Coffman29-Oct-2009 17:51
Another great image,Char! V
Tom Munson29-Oct-2009 15:55
Nice shot, Char! Hunter has the look!
firstbrook29-Oct-2009 14:42
what happened what happened !!!!!!!!!! don't stop now ;-))
Guest 29-Oct-2009 14:36
What a haunting mood. Excellent image, Char. BV
Katie Chew29-Oct-2009 14:32
Spooky image! Nicely done! V
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