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Too Soon the Night (Page 3)

The night Grandpa fell prey to the ghosts he had gone down to his Uncle Wilbur's cabin in the afternoon. He and his cousin Willie played checkers while his uncle and the local men talked about the up and coming Cleveland-Harrison election, how the cost of living kept going up and the latest news about a man named Jack the Ripper who was still terrorizing the streets of London.
When the oil lamps and tallows were lit to chase the darkness into the corners of the room grandpa knew he's better hike his boots for home. His ma wanted him home before dark and he realized he'd already stayed later than he should have.
"There's a full moon tonight," Willie reminded him. "The ghosts will rise up out of that old well tonight for sure. WHoooooo, whooooo, whooooo,” Willie clawed at the air looking and sounding demented.
Grandpa didn't take the time to punch him though he sorely wanted to he just strode out the door already quaking in his boots.


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LeuAnna Taylor04-Nov-2009 02:25
I love the way the oil lamp in your shot baths the wall and window frame in it's soft light. It fits so well into your story, Char!
David Bannister03-Nov-2009 07:55
This is really neat... thanks!!! V
an nguyen02-Nov-2009 00:51
Ugh.... can you come close to me . I love the light and the warmness.
poetry66601-Nov-2009 14:18
Love the image and chapter Char. You are so good at this my friend.BV!
waterfalls man29-Oct-2009 23:04
Beautiful & Creative V!
Patricia Kay29-Oct-2009 22:35
Great image Char to go with your chilling tale....BV
Cindi Smith29-Oct-2009 20:58
Oh, your stories should be published....been so busy lately just now have time to catch up and I'm loving all of your stories.
Neal Nye29-Oct-2009 11:21
A very effective image for this part of the story. I love that spooky moon!
January Grey29-Oct-2009 04:27
Creative & haunting composition, Char. V~
Bryan Murahashi29-Oct-2009 04:24
A great story and fabulous moon image. V
Marcia Colelli29-Oct-2009 00:38
Another wonderful story and great image V
Marcia Rules28-Oct-2009 23:55
a very cinematic approach taken here...terrific writing as well :)
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Hank Vander Velde28-Oct-2009 23:17
An other terrific image and continuation of the tale Char.
Al Chesworth28-Oct-2009 23:15
Poor grandpa.
Brilliant colour and treatment of this image Charlene.
Hank Vander Velde28-Oct-2009 23:15
Terrific again Char.
Katie Chew28-Oct-2009 20:07
Very well done! V
Victoria28-Oct-2009 19:45
Just love this image, so amazing frame, beautiful moon !!!!!fantastic
bill friedlander28-Oct-2009 18:47
Love this shot Char. The soft glow of the oil lamp balanced by the moon, texture of the window frame, the warm and cool tones, all great. V
Aida Villaronga28-Oct-2009 18:15
Wow!!! The warm light and colors are beautiful. BV
Jay Levin28-Oct-2009 18:02
I'm gonna go hide in the closet, Char! V
Jess. ( Lady.D.)28-Oct-2009 15:00
Well done Char, you really are so creative.....
Tom Munson28-Oct-2009 14:58
This is stunning, Char
Jim Coffman28-Oct-2009 13:40
Another well composed scene! Very well done,Char! V
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