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13-AUG-2005

Perki88 DG

Dad's Last Dance

Canon EOS 10D
1/60s f/8.0 at 28.0mm iso400 full exif

other sizes: small medium large original auto
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Digital Rebels15-Aug-2005 13:21
I agree with the crop...it was my first instinct but I didn't go with it. Why?..Maybe format?But at least I might PS it out.
DG
Guest 15-Aug-2005 11:38
Yes, a tighter crop would be better.. don't think a b&w is needed though..
pity you didn't have the fathe turn his head to face the bride it would then have been perfect.. When doing weddings you must not be afraid to take posed candids..
In otherwords .. say dad look at you daughter, with a smile. By the way you have 2 photos here.. if you see what I mean.. Oh! yes.. the camera should be your third eye :) Not a bad shot though..
Rafi
Guest 15-Aug-2005 07:59
Here I am critiquing your photo and I haven't been able to come up with a post yet. I did it because I think you might have a portfolio shot here with the crop. This should go in your Bridal Portfolio because it will allow the bride to picture herself in this positon without competing (or comparing herself) with anyone and it will work for you. JimM
Guest 15-Aug-2005 07:48
I agree with Gary on the crop. This cries for a B/W treatment and just cropping the only saturated color source will do it. So I think either crop or convert to B/W. Either way, I like the photo, but I think the crop would work better. JimM
Gary Martin14-Aug-2005 18:42
Very happy moment you've captured. I think cropping out the light at the top would improve the silhouette.