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16-JAN-2010 (c) Doug Cruden

17th - "Black Beauty"

near Winchcombe, Glos.

(Possibly the most famous horse book of them all, Anna Sewell's heart-tugging 1877 publication)

I suppose it should come as no surprise to see this here - horses feature pretty strongly in our family at the moment! I know, I know, Smokey isn't black, and he's always treated well and with oodles of love, but his steel-grey markings are really suited to this Challenge - and besides, he IS a beauty and such a friendly animal - I think he likes having his photo taken :o).

But a question - all the good photo books and tutorials say you should get maximum focus and sharpness on the subject's eyes - obviously, I haven't done that here, the light yesterday afternoon was appalling - it was almost dark when I took this shot, but increasing the ISO and using a wide aperture enabled me to shoot from underneath. Thus, I've gone for his nose instead - please be honest, would an eye-focused shot have been more effective? Does having his eyes OoF seem distracting? CC please!!! :o)))

Simples is the order of the day here - the NEF was opened into ACR, Clarity increased to 50% with a slight tweak of Brightness to bring out the features around his muzzle. Then into CS3, where I duplicated the Background Layer*; I added a B&W adjustment layer - the 'High-Contrast Red Filter' preset seemed to work best with Smokey's subtle colouring. I then added a Curves adjustment layer and tweaked the 'Linear Contrast' preset to enhance the contrasts across his face. Almost there! - I made a selection around his muzzle (feathering to 50%) and added Smart Sharpen (65% at 2px). With the selection still active, I flattened the image, Smart Sharpened again (85% at 0.75px) and resized.

* I always duplicate the Background Layer and work on that; in the event of something awful happening during my editing therefore, I can always revert to the orignal layer and start over again

Sunday's who's-a pretty-boy-then? entry to the Challenge; click here for other monochromed Pbasers in January

Nikon D300 ,Nikkor 50mm f/1.8 AF
1/250s f/2.8 at 50.0mm iso400 full exif

other sizes: small medium large original auto
Cindi Smith19-Jan-2010 00:43
I love the dof! I love horses....I love this image. Well shot!
Guest 18-Jan-2010 13:24
Great close up, I can almost touch his nose!
LynnH18-Jan-2010 13:03
I like your focus on the nose. There is a nice angle upward to the forehead. I like your narrative too!
Carl and Racine Erland18-Jan-2010 07:15
I've always felt that what works for you, in a particular circumstance, and gives you the results you want, is usually what you should do. In my opinion natural instinct is what helps take a photographer one step past the rules stage...in other words, I like it!. - Racine
Mary Terry18-Jan-2010 05:50
I think having his nose in focus works well in this shot.
Walter Otto Koenig18-Jan-2010 02:49
Great shot Doug. As a frequent animal shooter at the Zoo etc. I can tell you that the focus on the eyes bit does not take into account the length of the head when taken from this particular angle. Here quite correctly the nostrils are in focus, but as has been pointed out rules are just rules, and at the end of the day it has to look good, which this shot does. I mean what a boring world it would be if we all shot like (insert your favorite photographer here). I love being surprised seeing the unusual and the innovative and this image does it for me, and not only the focus on the nose, but the bit of lip and the gentle expression that Smokey has. Oh and f/2.8 is just right too! "V"
Mieke WA Minkjan18-Jan-2010 00:55
perfect focus and dof
Barbara Heide17-Jan-2010 22:58
lovely! excellent focus and dof!
McGarva17-Jan-2010 22:11
Wonderful DOF on the nose! ... you got me humming that blo*dy tune now!
tinkerb17-Jan-2010 21:52
I was always told 'dangerous both ends and uncomfortable in the middle' or was that a camel! But I confess he has friendly face well caught. I rather like the focus on his muzzle, I think it works really well.
carol j. phipps17-Jan-2010 21:18
Nice closeup!
Bernard Davis17-Jan-2010 21:02
Ecellent and fun portrait of the beast. This is such a good pose I'm sure it would be used by a horsey magazine somewhere.
Voted
Phillip Normanton17-Jan-2010 21:00
Why the long face?! :o) I think it's just fine to focus on the snozzle here, it's different with peeps of course! Theoretically bokeh in front of the plane of focus isn't as smooth as that behind and with a gee-gee, there's quite a lot of important stuff in front of the eyes... anyway, I like it - don't think it would have worked as well with the eyes in focus and the conk a big blurry mess :o)
lisamidi17-Jan-2010 20:06
Most is said already, I think you made the right choice...or maybe you even did not have a choice as a focus on the eyes would have turned the nose into blur and there is so much interest in this lovely warm horse nose...makes it a real lovely horse portrait.
Nancy Good17-Jan-2010 16:48
Everyone also knows that it is the NOSE that we all love to touch, so we now want to put our hands right there and feel that velvet softness. Beautiful equine portrait!
Ronald Bijtenhoorn17-Jan-2010 16:41
Good shot; like the DOF and POV
globalgadabout17-Jan-2010 15:35
oh...i see...it's not an SP then...focus on the eyes would have left his nose a big blob in the foreground...so this was the best choice...that's such a special, kissable nose too...V
Johnny JAG17-Jan-2010 14:35
Super horsey portrait Doug, love the focus.
J. Scott Coile17-Jan-2010 13:34
Sweet old face.
borisalex17-Jan-2010 13:14
Very nice shot, so cool and your sense of humor is I like very much!
Timothy Guenther17-Jan-2010 12:43
I really like the detail you've captured on his hairy snout! Especially in monochrome, this portrait is excellent.
Jola Dziubinska17-Jan-2010 12:31
Beautiful portrait of this horse, excellent pov and DOF. V.
Kevin Chester17-Jan-2010 11:50
I think the nose focus works well on most animals , especially dogs, horses and cows. If the foreground was out of focus due to a focal point on the eyes it would look terrible. Since a smaller app wasn't an option I think you made the right shot. Having said all that I'm still learning an awful lot about this myself, so this is an opinion rather than a technical observation. Phew. Nice shot anyway Doug
Mairéad17-Jan-2010 11:46
Rules are made to be broken and this shot of his soft nose works a treat as you can still see his
bright eyes and friendly ears.
I loved 'Black Beauty' as a kid - read it (and cried) so many times.
marita toftgard17-Jan-2010 10:57
so sweet!!!!
great shallow dof
v
Available Light Images17-Jan-2010 10:52
Ok, after yesterday, I promise not to horse around. Given you had a choice of either sharp eyes or sharp nose, I think you made the right choice. The Dof isn't shallow enough to through it completely out of focus,. so you'd have been left with a couple of nostrils... This works in my opinion.
Guest 17-Jan-2010 10:42
Hi Black Beauty.... You are beautiful taken by Doug :-)
Stephanie17-Jan-2010 10:23
I like the nose-on shot Doug! Smokey is looking for a free handout. I'd feed him a carrot and pull on his whiskers if I were there!
Guest 17-Jan-2010 10:10
cool compo, great shot.
Sheila17-Jan-2010 10:08
From this angle I don't think it matters a jot that his eyes aren't the focal point. His nose is just lovely :-) A very , very nice animal portrait, Doug.
Kathryn17-Jan-2010 09:04
Horses scare me, every since one broke free at a 'Summer fete thingy' - luckily no one was hurt, it was just the power of the animal. Anyway lovely photo of Smokey and he does look a friendly chap, plus he is behind a fence. Have a great Sunday.
Ann...17-Jan-2010 09:03
OK now he's had his photo taken he wants a treat....make with the treats pdq!! :))
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