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27-FEB-2010
The Apprentice cropped
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Inga Morozoff
04-Mar-2010 02:42
Wonderful improvement.
Walter Otto Koenig
01-Mar-2010 21:05
Much better with the crop which gives this more focus Bernard and you have richer tones as well. Looks like a winner to me.
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28-Feb-2010 10:59
Bernard, great suggestions here have really improved the image, this is much better, really works with the 'older' tone coming out of the image.
lisamidi
27-Feb-2010 21:03
For me, it works very well now as I had the same idea about it as Walter and Peter. It's now very coherent and the focus is on the dark part of the machine which gives it a feeling of danger. Great capture!
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