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16-MAY-2007

Visions of sunset at dawn

In the summer of 1998, I learned an ancient Indonesian verse form, the pantoum. Its circular way with words appealed to me, much as the mandala's circular way with images had done for years. The pantoum, as I was taught, is four stanzas with lines set up as follows: 1-2-3-4, 2-5-4-6, 5-7-6-8, 7-3-8-1. One ends up where one began, knowing it for the first time, to paraphrase T.S. Eliot. What follows is a pantoum inspired by today's image:

Early morning shimmers on a choppy lake
I look not behind me at the sun but ahead
Squinting my eyes at what is to come
Sunset, the elder’s refuge

I look not behind me at the sun but ahead
Into the unknown mystery of endings
Sunset, the elder’s refuge
When answers replace the questions

Into the unknown mystery of endings
I turn my wrinkled face
When answers replace the questions
And dawn’s promises are kept

I turn my wrinkled face
Squinting my eyes at what is to come
And dawn‘s promises are kept
Morning sunlight shimmers on a choppy lake


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daanstringer.com04-Jun-2007 21:33
great!
Guest 27-May-2007 03:37
Patricia, You never cease to amaze me. Sorry I missed this when you posted, but glad I caught up with it. You are an extremly fast study in photoshop. Big Vote.
Dr. Michael G. Mathews18-May-2007 14:07
Wonderful image. Well done!
Neal Nye18-May-2007 12:12
There aren't superlatives enough to describe this photo and poem. You really outdid yourself today. Outdid everyone else too, for that matter. I'm certainly going to be returning to this often! What a treasure!
Guest 18-May-2007 09:36
Absolutely beautiful.....Thanks Patricia.
Dan Ng18-May-2007 08:12
Lovely monochrome, Patricia! V.
flowsnow18-May-2007 05:20
Well done. V
Guest 18-May-2007 00:33
I LOVE this verse and shot! You are a genius! V
edwina beaumont17-May-2007 18:40
very atmospheric
Char17-May-2007 17:27
Hi Patricia,
A fantastic picture!
Guest 17-May-2007 16:57
This is beautiful!
an american mother 17-May-2007 16:44
this is a picture of discovery
Silvia Roitman17-May-2007 16:08
Great!
Greg Harp17-May-2007 16:06
Fantastic work. V
Terri Steele17-May-2007 15:59
I love this!
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