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Rain / 30 April 05

The sun is melting
as it slowly turns to rain.
It falls with such intensity,
as it slowly starts to drain.

Tears fill my eyes again.
I’m drowning in the flood,
sinking to the bottom.
Where are you? Where are you now?

Floating slowly to the top,
floating till the end of time.
When the wind sweeps me off my feet,
I know you’ll catch me when I fall.

It blows me upside down,
but when you’re near I’m not afraid.
Rain falls hard in this place;
it leaves endless tears upon my face.

By Patty Tricoli

Passeggericlan gave me the inspiration for the framing of my picture. Thank you.


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northstar3701-May-2005 07:11
Lovely fresh rain.
Gary Winters01-May-2005 05:24
Wonderful moody shot, and I agree, the frame isn't necessary. The image is fantastic!
Guest 01-May-2005 04:48
Nice frame, and great caption
Chris01-May-2005 03:45
I think I am in the minority, judging from previous comments, but I don't much care for the frame. I think the photo is excellent and would be better suited with a matte, at most.
Guest 01-May-2005 03:21
Very moody shot.
Guest 01-May-2005 01:53
Very nice image and framing. It really transmits a mood
Elaine (etfitz)01-May-2005 01:50
Wonderful image! Love the framing!
Gayle P. Clement01-May-2005 00:47
Beautiful photo of a rainy day.
Guest 01-May-2005 00:09
Reminds me of looking out my grandmothers screen door when I was little :)
Nice treatment Susanne!
Guest 30-Apr-2005 23:31
Nice! Definitely swamp-ville going on there today. Love the framing.
Antonis Sarantos30-Apr-2005 23:15
Bravo Susanne. Voted!
Chris Sofopoulos30-Apr-2005 22:15
Excellent framing indeed. Gives another perspective to the photo. Great work.
Guest 30-Apr-2005 22:02
The frame makes this shot. No, the photo is good, but the framing is cool.
JeremyGood30-Apr-2005 21:49
Morosely misty mood.
Lee Rudd30-Apr-2005 21:40
Ahhhhh rain - I know it soooooo well ;) Nice image
Guest 30-Apr-2005 21:34
Good effect ;^))
I love the moody beautiful picture
Guest 30-Apr-2005 21:20
Great atmospheric shot. I do like that framing.
Pepe Zyman30-Apr-2005 21:16
Very nice composition.
Guest 30-Apr-2005 21:10
Susanne , this is very elegant , nice job of framing ! thanks for sharing !