This one still isn't quite what I wanted, as I still don't have my indoor technique figured out yet ;).
I'll probably keep trying to improve on the lighting and whatnot.
Revised 12/11: I reshot the Edison, but still wasn't completely happy with the results.
I managed to get more detail out of a different record, and out of the Edison logo; but as for the brass bits (although probably sharper and more true to life today), I think I prefer the moodier tones of the original pic.
So I cobbled bits and pieces of the different pictures together.
Maybe the record label is too prominent now...I dunno.
I'll probably try to shoot it again tomorrow, and change the lighting yet again.