Judges Comments

The bright light and lamp post immediately draws the eye and becomes the dominant focal point, pulling attention away from the darker scene behind it.
Fine detail is also reduced by noise from the low-light conditions, which affects overall sharpness. Since the story centres on the Bridge and Luna Park,
a tighter crop that removes the lamp post and foreground would create a stronger composition. Bracketing exposures would give you better control
over highlights and deep shadows, improving the overall dynamic range. Shooting just after sunset could also help capture more subtle tones in the sky.