Judges Comments

The image loses some impact due to its flat tonal and dynamic range. Increasing the exposure, contrast, and brightness would give it more tonal life. Introducing
more creative, directional lighting would also draw the viewer in, strengthen engagement with the two cages, and guide attention more clearly to the focal point.
The left side of the window and the top of the frame compete for attention. Toning down and desaturating these areas would help strengthen the overall image.