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How Much

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You have created a good story here. The tonal range is ok however I find the highlights to be a little bit overpowering. I would bring those down in the overall image.
There are a few strange areas in the image which give away the editing/composite work involved. The area above the man on the right is inconsistent and
shows where the image is 'not real'. The harsh shadowing around the basked on the mans leg in the background is very obvious and could be toned down.
Adding some more darkening to different areas of the ground behind the table would give the image depth and bring the interaction forward in the image.

1/20s f/8.0 at 46.0mm iso250 full exif

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