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24-JUL-2014

Plumbing on the Wall -ArtP

OK, reworked and moved to X

Olympus OM-D E-M5 ,m.Zuiko 17mm f1.8
1/40s f/2.0 at 17.0mm iso1600 full exif

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Olympus DSLR Challenge05-Aug-2014 02:48
Oh, this version is SO much improved, in my not-always-so-humble opinion. Thanks, Art. --Stefan
Zin 04-Aug-2014 15:24
Wall as barrier, wall as conduit. And what might be on the opposite side? It's two-faced, with a multi-task "personality" ... why, it's almost human!
Thane 01-Aug-2014 21:47
Hiya ArtP. I agree with Stefan. Can you post the original in the forum please. If not, looking forward to your second (third fourth fifth :) ) rework. I like the plumbing bit but as the title suggests, it should be the star.
ArtP 29-Jul-2014 13:09
Ah, well I originally darkened it to better show detail on the light door, then cropped off most of the door. I'm thinking I'll rework it w a less severe crop and treat the door separately.
Olympus DSLR Challenge27-Jul-2014 14:19
This has good graphical interest but is too dark overall for my taste. Maybe push the exposure a little? --Stefan