I think this well composed image. The point Dunc raised may be due to visible sun rays that need a bit space more.But it works fine with me. Besides that this image is very well balanced.
This has some great colour, and I fully agree that the people walking up to the Church makes it work so well. The only reservation would be that I don't think there's enough thought given to the composition of these interesting subjects. Maybe a tighter crop would work a bit better, or perhaps losing some sky and adding more black to the bottom would balance it? Cheers, Dunc