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22-FEB-2005 Marc Baumser

Where once a building stood by Marc Baumser

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Guest 26-Feb-2005 19:25
Marc,

I like the shot. I think what distracts is the horizon that is not level.
I would take the same shot a bit more angled to the right (so the buildings disappear at the horizon) and I would get the horizon perfectly level.

JL
Richard Bird24-Feb-2005 00:52
Hi Marc, very nice color and texture on the brick and small stones in the foreground, but the top third of the shot appears a little cluttered to me.
Regards,
Richard.
Marc Baumser23-Feb-2005 23:44
Claudio,
You are exactly right. And between now and deadline if I come up with something better I'll replace this. It needs another element. A structure or even a flower growing. The brick draws you in but just leaves you there.

Marc
Konica Minolta Users23-Feb-2005 15:57
Good idea Mark. It's a good image, but something is missing (aside from the building ;-)
I can't put my finger on what it is exactly

Claudio