I like this gallery and the comments by PK. Lovely model who could relax more and give us some of that lovely smile. Nice shooting.
PK
19-Aug-2009 15:37
OK, Shelley is a very beautiful woman. What is in the water down there?
Going out on a limb here, guessing she was a little nervous..some shots look a little "stiff" (tell it like I see it, both photographer and model deserve the truth). Having said that Shelley can't stop...she looks really good on silver-oxide...
Couple of comments on individual shots...
1st three, head on hands - first one is good, suggest less symetry, don't square off the shoulders, it'll make Shelley look more relaxed..second two..lighting...??
2nd two and last one, yellow bench(?) - first one is over the top in pose, second is better but needs fill flash, lost some skin tone and she has good skin...last one is good on lighting...small smile???
Waiting for train - some dark foreshadows, wish model was turned toward camera at shoulder to look more relaxed...love the black dress and boots...bit of white rope and you'd have "damsel in distress" from old silent movies...
Against the wall - Like the headshot in landscape orientation (looks more natural), would like to see some with a large aperture (wall would be less in focus, emphasizing model). The picture of Shelley squatting in front of the wall is very cool because it is a photo that shows confidence of the model (confidence is sexy) and trust in the photographer..no need to go over the edge but put that model in a t-shirt and a pair of jeans and go get some more shots...
Shelley if you read this, good for you for letting Saint Girl publish these...relax and have fun with people's comments...life is short...
