Thanks for the comments - My son Wes (12) did this with my Max 9 at a diner - I left it as he wanted it but I agree, I would crop it a little off the top and left to get rid of that emergency light.
Vince
Things that work for me:
I like the placement of the wall corner in the composition
I find alot of interest in the lines and texture of the ceiling tiles.
Things that don't work for me:
The piece of emergency lighting on the left wall is distracting to me.
I think the DOF should either be increased to bring everything into focus or decreased to the point where the main subject jumps out.
