I gladly accept comments from all who are willing to give them. As you can see I'm still working on composition and other several aspects of photography. Please don't worry that I will be offended in any way. If you like or dislike this image then you might like to see another one I completed a couple of days ago.
http://www.pbase.com/kwhite/image/33491304
Will Burnham
07-Sep-2004 16:47
Some thoughts. This B&W image has great contrast and tonal range. I like the positioning of the road in the frame. What would really make this photo work for me is this. Since the sky is "bald" and uninteresting move the horizon line up in the frame to de-emphasize the sky and put the emphasis on the landscape. Now if the shy was full of dramatic clouds I would lower the horizon line. Also, avaiod putting the horizon line directly across the middle of the composition. It creates a very neutral image. I hope my constructive advice is well taken. It is well intended. Peace and may all of your days be full of photo ops. --Will
