Thanks so much Roberta and Shu for your critique on this one. I redid it using Roberta's levels and really think it made a positive difference. The adjusted one is below. I wanted to leave them both on because it is a learning experience for anyone viewing.
Thanks so much Roberta for viewing as well as your comments on the Canon 10D new ones. I will put this in and do as you recommend. This was before you taught me the magic that levels can do!